一、高分作文必备6大点:
①华丽的修饰部分;
②特殊句、复合句的使用;
③超纲词汇的使用;
④用句式表达地道;
⑤语法正确;
⑥书写美观。
二、具体方法:
1.尽量写被动句
越来越多的人意识到污染很严重
主动:more and more people realize the serious of pollution.
被动+润色:pollution is realized exceedingly severe by an increasing number
of people.(别再用more and more people 了!!!)
2.华丽的修饰:
①动词前加副词修饰名词前加形容词修饰
(名词修饰名词时,用of连接
the sighs of the young man)
②先行词为抽象名词时,+that引导同位语从句③先行词为人时,用who引导定从④先行词非人时,用which引导定从
3.改句子
(1)状语
①分词作状语If winter comes, sring will arrive soon.Winter comming,sring will arrive soon.
When I was a little girl,I was eager to grow up.
Being a little girl,I was eager to grow up.
(把状语从句的引导词去掉,从句的谓语动词改为非谓语结构
若主从句主语一致,可在从句中省略主语)
②让步状语
Although引导,丰富句子
Although one can live as if he were a pig,he can never be as happy as a pig.
(2)特殊句
①强调句
It is 强调部分 that 余下部分
(把it is that 去掉,它仍然是完整的句子)
原句:I met CC in the street yesterday.
强调时间:It wasyesterday that I met CC.
强调CC:It was CC that I met yesterday.
(写作中,it是加分项哦~)
②部分倒装
(Tip:相当于变成一般疑问句:把系动词提到主语前面)
A.否定副词位于句首(never、seldom、not...)
例1:
I have never beento other countries except Japan
改:Neverhave I beento other countries except Japan
例2:
Not onlydid they developsuch a device....(原:they developed..)
B.only 位于句首
His girlfriend calledhis name only once
Only oncedid his girlfriendcall his name
Onlyrecently did linguists begin the serious...(原:linguists began)
③虚拟语气的倒装
If winter came,spring would arrive
Did winter come,spring would arrive.
④插入语
主谓之间,加入插入语
The story about the hen,for my part,seeks to draw our attention to the issue of honesty.
三、总结
①多把主动句改为被动句,词汇能写高级就高级=
②动词前加副词修饰
名词前加形容词修饰
③擅用倒装、虚拟语气和强调句
④句式写复杂,加入插入语,主语、宾语从句里面加同位语,定语从句和状语从句
⑤地道简单句积累一些歇后语、谚语
⑥复合句格式:状语,(定语/同位语)主语,插入语,(状语)谓语(注意时态)+(定语/同位语/状语)宾语/表语Eg:Radically, changing the orthodox way of studying ,in conclusion, is an incontrovertible thing although there are a sea of debates over it.
学姐(我)练作文的方法:
①背好的句子(万能句)——积累好的句子和单词
②模仿范文中好的句子结构——练习写句子
③模仿范文的文章结构——学会先用中文想出文章的框架和大致内容
④翻译想好的中文——写出文章
附录:(学长原创好句子)
A.基础模板
1.They should put themselves in .... shoes with an indebted heart.2.Bear in mind that a A without a B is nothing and a B without A is nothing.
3.The past years, across the Chinese landscape, haveWitnessed a pronounced phenomenon that......
4.Topping the list is that.....(不要再用first of all了!)5.This hot button has triggered considerable public concern.6.It is my belief that.....(不要再用I think了!!!)7.It is beyond dispute that....8.The evidence that.....manifests that.....9.Quite a few citizens are of the opinion that.....
1.他们应该以一颗感恩的心设身处地为....着想2.记住一个没有...的...什么都不是,没有...的...也什么也不是3.在过去的几年中,在中国大地上有一个明显的现象.....4.排在名单第一的是...
5.这个热门话题引起了公众的关注6.我认为7.....是毋庸置疑的8....这个事实表明了....9.一些人认为
B.进阶模板
1.In today’s fast-paced information-overload world and with
the booming economy (用在文首)
2.There is a growing/overwhelming tendency that an increasing
number of people are participating in a hot debate in
regard to the worrying issue of how to control/handle......this condition has been prevalent in contemporary society. (用在文首)
3.Although that sure is like a double-edged sword, I will
be inclined to have the latter opinion at my back and
frown upon the former view.
4.Not only does it provide the sb with basic/profitable sth, but it manages to expose sb to the up-to-date knowledge.
5.The younger generation ought to be compelled to do sth(不要再用people should do....了!!!)
6.In brief, we have reasons to hailing fervidly look forward to a faster rejuvenation of this country (用在文末)
1.今天高速发展、信息负载的世界和蓬勃发展的经济2.这里有一个正在发展/压倒性越来越多的人参与激烈的讨论的趋势关于如何处理/控制....令人担忧的问题,这种情况在当今社会盛行3.虽然它确实是像一把双刃剑.但是我更加倾向于支持前者的观点和不赞助后者的观点4.它不仅能提供某人基础的/有益的某物,而且它设法让某人获得了新知识,5.从长远来看,年轻的一代应该不得不去做一些6.简而言之,我们有理由充满激情地期待这个国家快速回春
C.It句型
①强调句(前面有说)
②It is done +主从(表达观点)
It is thought/proposed/argued that....
Eg:It is proposed that the system be changed
③It + adj/n +主从(表示评价)
It is obvious that ...
It is surely a good thing that...
D.高级词汇(50个)
1 Brave=stouthearted勇敢的,名词+ness,副词+ly
2 Zealous=fervid热心的,名词+ness,副词+ly
3 Happy=jocular欢乐的,名词+ity,副词+ly
4 Delicious=ambrosial美味的,副词+ly
5 Outdate=fusty过时的,名词把y改i+ness,副词把y改i+ly
6 Mysterious=runic 神秘的
7 philanthropic 博爱的,名词ic改为y,副词+ally
8 bathetic 平凡的
9 immanent 内在的,固有的
10 preponderant压倒性的,副词+ly
11 canny 精明的
12 resplendent 华丽的,辉煌的
13 a plenitude of 大量,充分
14 anemic 缺乏活力的
15 grisly 恐怖的,震惊的
16 willy-nilly毫无犹豫
17 sparing节省的
18 willful任性的,有意的
19 aseptic 干净的
20 fretful 不安的
21 slovenly 马虎的
22 ubiquitous 普遍存在的
23 prepossessing有魅力的,引人注意的,名词+ness,副词+ly
24 arresting 有趣的,醒目的,副词+ly
25 carefree无忧无虑的
26 veracious 诚实的,名词+ness,副词+ly
27 offbeat 离奇的
28 orthodox传统的,正统的,副词+ly
29 foolproof 万无一失的
30 pandemic普遍的
31 draconian 苛刻的
32 rambunctious 吵闹的
33 intransigent 固执的,名词t改ce,副词+ly
34 pulchritudinous 美丽的
35 demotic 通俗的
36 perspicacious 聪明的,名词+ness,副词+ly
37 ebullient 热情洋溢的
38 cherubic 可爱的
39 teeming 丰富的,多产的
40 personable 英俊的
41 verbose 冗长的
42 seminal重要的
43 elephantine巨大的
44 nugatory 无价值的
45 egoistic 自私自利的
46 bootless 无用的
47 deleterious 有害的
48 incontrovertible无可争议的
49 squeamish 害怕的
50 stingy小气的
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